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雅思写作长难句技巧

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雅思写作长难句技巧

雅思写作长难句技巧。很多考生都不会长难句,下面是小编整理的雅思写作长难句技巧,欢迎阅读!

雅思写作之如何通过长难句加分

1,雅思写作中长难句会加分么?

高分的写作要求我们有语法的丰富度,也就是时态,语气与语态的结合,除此之外还要有多变的句式结构(复杂句加简单句)

其中,复杂句是最能考验一个学生语言功底的句子,正确的架构一个长难句对于考官来说,无疑是一个高分亮点。

eg.Many schools are eager to hire experienced employees.(简单句)

eg.Many schools are eager to hire employees who possess the organisational skills needed tocomplete the duties associated with teaching.(复杂句)

但这并不意味,所有的句子都得由长难句来完成,长难句是起到画龙点睛之笔,偶尔也需要短句来调节考官的阅读节奏。(要注意所有论点的提出只能用简单句)

因此,可以负责任的说,长难句的存在对于作文分数的提高有着至关重要的作用。

2,长难句分为哪几种?

是不是字数多就是长难句啊?

我是不是要把主语的头弄大一点

万一写个长难句还有语法错误,还不如不写了

没有语法错误,全写小短句我也可以拿高分吧嘿嘿

我敢肯定很多烤鸭都有以上掩耳盗铃或者天真可爱的想法。但在这里需要指出的是,长难句区别于简单句,即要有复杂的句式结构,而不仅仅是字数的限制。

所谓英文的复杂句,从本质上来说不过就是两个(或者两个以上)简单句和连词的叠加。

基础结构为:

(连接词)+主+谓+宾+(连接词)+主+谓+(宾)

当然亦可以通过“嵌套”出更为复杂的复杂句,但一般高分作文的复杂句只含有一个主句和1~2个从句及少量短语,再辅以简单句和并列句。

Take it easy,我们并没有变态到到让你写出3、4个从句的长难句。

细分一下长难句的种类,可以主要分为以下几种

1.主句+从句

例如:Some citizens take it for granted that environmental problems should be resolved by government alone without any personal effort.(用it作为形式宾语的宾语从句)

2.倒装,强调或者虚拟

例如:(1)Strange as I may seem,parent's attention sometimes hinder student's academic performance in school.(倒装)

(2)It is the interaction of the two that shapes a person's personality and dictates how that personality develops.(强调)

(3)If sufficient sky train and underground train systems were built and effectively maintained in our major cities,then traffic on the roads would be dramatically reduced.(虚拟)

3.长句加短语的结合

例如:Persuading manufacturers and travellers to adopt this new technology would be effective stragegy for improving air quality,especially in cities.(动名词作主语)

4.用连词进行列举

例如:Physical activity could be encouraged relatively cheaply,for exampleby installing exercise equipment in parks.

3怎么写出正确的长难句

根据第二部分给出的长难句种类,

现在我们来仔细研究一下句子的主要框架结构。

1.主句+从句

(1) 宾语从句:someone take it in account(认为)

someone take it into granted(认为什么理所当然)

it 作为形式宾语(高分用法)

(2)高端定语从句:及物动词/介词 +the extent to which+句子

eg.The government must consider the extent to which environmental problems can be resolved.

(3)主语从句:That+句子+makes it+adj+(for sb )to do sth /句子

eg.That the government invests more in arts,like music and painting makes it possible that the cities and town will become a more attractive place to live in.

(4)非谓语结构:Given +名词/ Given that+句子

eg.Given that most young couples are too occupied to cinsider having babies,it is therefore imperative that they put off their parenthood.

2.倒装,强调或者虚拟

(1)倒装:Only...can.https://www.engpx.com/Not only...but also.https://www.engpx.com/Be it...or(不管是...还是...)

(2)强调:It is...that.https://www.engpx.com/It is...who(正是......导致了......)

(3)虚拟:If...were...,...would...(注意在虚拟语气中,this和that后都要用were而不是was)

3.长句加短语的结合

例如在句子后面加入限定成分especially in citits/coutries/modern society, both in cities and on motorways, in this respect,ect.

eg.A person needs to fell that they are doing valued and valuable work,so positive feedback from superiors is very important in this respect.

4.用连词进行扩展

例如用such as,for example,instead of,as well as 等等

eg.Being a celebrity—such as a famous film star or sports personality—brings problems as well asbenifit.

※in terms of(在......方面),for the sake of(为了改善......) ,regardless of(不管......) 其实也是复杂句的三大绝活。

例如:

(1)This children are often spoilt,not in terms of love and attention because working parents do not have time for this.

(2)......for the sake of their healty

(3) regardless of price

如何使用雅思写作长难句

一、避免空洞的单词和词组

一些空洞的单词或词组根本不能为句子带来任何相关的或重要的信息,完全可以被删掉。

比如:When all things are considered, young adults of today live more satisfying lives than those of their parents, in my opinion.这句话当中的“when all things are considered”和“in my opinion“都显得多余。完全可以去掉。还有些空洞和繁琐的表达方式可以进行替换。例如:Due to the fact that our grandparents were under an obligation to help their parents, they did not have the options that young people have at this point in time。“due to the fact that”就是一个很典型的繁琐的表达方式的例子,可以替换。

二、避免重复使用同样的词汇

避免重复使用同样的词汇或者有的时候虽然词汇没有重复,但意思却有重复,这时候可以做一些简化。比如:The farm my grandfather grew up on was large in size.large对一个farm来说就是size方面的large,所以in size可以去掉。

三、选择恰当的语法结构

选择合适的语法结构可以使句子意思的表达更为精确和简练。虽然语法的多样性也很重要,但选择最恰当的语法结构仍然是更为重要的考虑因素。一个句子的主语和谓语动词应该能够反映句子中的最重要的意思。比如:The situation that resulted in my grandfather's not being able to study engineering was that his father needed help on the farm.从意思上来分析,上面这句话需要表达的重要的概念是“grandfather's not being able to study”,而在表达这个概念时,原句用的主语是situation,谓语动词是was,不能强调需要表达的重点概念,可以改为下面这句话:My grandfather couldn't study engineering because his father needed help on the farm.

三个雅思写作高分技巧分享

雅思写作高分技巧一: 避免空洞的单词和词组

1. 一些空洞的单词或词组根本不能为句子带来任何相关的或重要的信息,完全可以被删掉。比如下面的句子:

When all things are considered, young adults of today live more satisfying lives than those of their parents, in my opinion.

这句话当中的“when all things are considered”和“in my opinion“都显得多余。完全可以去掉。改为:

Young adults of today live more satisfying lives than their parents.

2. 有些空洞和繁琐的表达方式可以进行替换,例如:

Due to the fact that our grandparents were under an obligation to help

their parents, they did not have the options that young people have at

this point in time.

“due to the fact that”就是一个很典型的繁琐的表达方式的例子,可以替换,简化为下面的表达方式:

Because our grandparents were obligated to help their parents, they did not have the options that young people have now.

雅思写作高分技巧二: 避免重复

1. 尽量避免重复使用同样的词汇。或者有的时候虽然词汇没有重复,但意思却有重复。这时候可以做一些简化的工作。例如下面这个例子:

The farm my grandfather grew up on was large in size.

large 对一个farm来说就是size方面的large,所以in size可以去掉,改为:

The farm my grandfather grew up on was large.

更简洁的表达方式为:

My grandfather grew up on a large farm.

2. 有时一个词组可以用一个更简单的单词来替换,例如:

My grandfather has said over and over again that he had to work on his parents' farm。

这里的over and over again就可以改为repeatedly,显得更为简洁:

My grandfather has said repeatedly that he had to work on his parents' farm.

雅思写作高分技巧三:选择最恰当的语法结构

选择合适的语法结构可以使句子意思的表达更为精确和简练。虽然语法的多样性也很重要,但选择最恰当的语法结构仍然是更为重要的考虑因素。以下原则是在考虑选择何种语法结构时可以参考的原则:

1. 一个句子的主语和谓语动词应该能够反映句子中的最重要的意思。例如:.

The situation that resulted in my grandfather's not being able to study

engineering was that his father needed help on the farm.

从意思上来分析,上面这句话需要表达的重要的概念是“grandfather's not being able to study”,而在表达这个概念时,原句用的主语是situation,谓语动词是was,不能强调需要表达的重点概念,可以改为下面这句话:

My grandfather couldn't study engineering because his father needed help on the farm.

2.避免频繁使用“there be”结构,例如下面的句子:

There were 25 cows on the farm that my grandfather had to milk every day. It was hard work for my grandfather.

可以改为:

My grandfather worked hard. He had to milk 25 cows on the farm every day.

更简洁的句式为:

My grandfather worked hard milking 25 cows daily.

3.把从句改为短语或单词。例如:

Dairy cows were raised on the farm, which was located100 kilometers

from the nearest university and was in an area that was remote.

简介的表达方式为:

The dairy farm was located in a remote area, 100 kilometers to the nearest university.

4.仅在需要强调宾语而不是主语的时候,才使用被动语态。例如:

In the fall, not only did the cows have to be milked, but also the hay was mowed and stacked by my grandfather's family.

本句不够简洁的原因是本句的重心应该是“忙碌的家庭-my grandfather's family”,而使用了被动语态后,仿佛重心变成了cows和hay。下面的表达方式是主动语态,相对来说更简洁一些:

In the fall, my grandfather's family not only milked the cow but also mowed and stacked the hay.

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