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雅思大作文的技巧

雅思大作文的技巧。写作文也需要技巧才能写好的,下面是小编整理的雅思大作文的技巧,欢迎阅读!

老师教你雅思大作文写作技巧

步骤一:审题(3 分钟)

审题是有效完成任务的第一步,也是最关键的一步。从评分标准看,审题的正确与否与“Task Response”有着直接的联系。而在当前模板泛滥,文章千篇一律的大环境下,有效审题是突破六分的一条准绳。不少考生在审题时,要么蜻蜓点水、草草一读,要么只关注题目中词的同义转换。如此读题,都有可能对之后的文章撰写方向造成偏差。而建议考生采取的有效的读题方法应为:

通读题目,了解大意。

细读题目,分析句子间的逻辑关系。

再读题目,辨别关键词,区分主题词和限定词,推测考官的出题意图。

由于大部分考生只作到了读题的第一步,所以出现离题或部分离题的可能性很大。以下面这个考题为例:

There are more workers to work from home and more students to study from home. This is because the computer technology is more and more easily accessible and cheaper. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

通读题目,了解大意。

当前有越来越多的工人在家里工作,有越来越多的学生在家里学习。这是因为电脑技术越来越容易获得,也越来越便宜了。你认为这是个正面的还是负面的发展趋势?

备注:题中的accessible有不少考生不理解,对审题的准确性会造成一定影响。

细读题目,分析句子间的逻辑关系。

要把握题目中的句子间逻辑关系,关键是能读懂代词“this”; “it”的具体指代。

“this”是指第一句话。

“it”可理解为前两句所呈现的这一现象。为了使文章写作方向更为明确,这里可把it 概括为:

the wider usage of computer technology in working or studying from home

再读题目,辨别关键词,区分主题词和限定词,推测考官的出题意图。

主题词:Computer technology in working or studying from home

限定词:positive or negative

不容忽视的词:easily accessible and cheaper

题目信息解构:

(topic) positive(benefits)

Computer technology in working or studying from home

↑ (causes) Negative (drawbacks)

Easily accessible and cheaper

对题目做出如上分析,确保撰写的文章能包含以上的信息,审题这关绝对能过。

以上用时不超过3分钟。

步骤二:列大纲(3分钟)

根据以上的题目解构信息,寻找关键词的下义词和衍生词,根据已有素材确定写作框架。

如:

Computer technology:on-line, PC, laptop, broadband

Working from home: Fashion designer; freelancer; translator; journalist; writer; music composer,

artists Studying from home: on-line course, the disable who are difficult to move; course in the foreign country

Cheaper: on-line IELTS course --several hundred RMB

Class IELTS course -- several thousand RMB

Easily accessible : in city-- at least one PC every house

Broadband:almost every house; school

Net bar: almost every neighbourhood

Outline:

2 Introduction:

Computer technology in home-study and home- work (topic)

Positive development (opinion)

2 Body:

Benefits of studying from home:

Cheaper--- IELTS course (on-line /class)

Freer--- white collar for further education in free time

Benefits of working from home:

Artists(music composer/fashion designer)---- more productive

Freelancer( translator/journalists)---- more working opportunity

Drawbacks:

Lack self-control /independence( line-addicts)

2 Conclusion: inevitable trend( with self-discipline)

备注:在实战考试中无需把大纲写得如此详细,但胸有成竹一定会使之后文章的写作如鱼得水。

步骤三:文章撰写(30-35分钟)

一般文章为4-5段,平均每段用时5-10分钟

备注:建议考生在大作文写作时一定要写结论段,以体现文章的完整性。

步骤四:检查(1-2分钟)

此时,不宜做大的修改,把笔误的部分改掉即可。

吸引考官注意的7种开头方法

1. 采用媒体报道引出话题,把问题呈现在读者面前,引起读者思考

例如在写关于该不该禁烟的话题时,可以这样开头:A recent study conducted by Zhongshan University has found that the number of smokers has been increasing sharply over the past five years. Research findings also reveal that the incidence of smoking-related conditions has soared. As a result, the ban on smoking has been in the spotlight. (中山大学最近做的一个研究表明,在过去五年里,吸烟人数急剧上升。研究结果同时显示,吸烟导致的疾病发病率也急剧增长。因此,禁烟成为一个热点话题。这个开头通过媒体报道把问题呈现在读者面前,从而引出吸烟比例急剧上升造成的危害,引发读者思考。

2. 提出有争议性的问题,激发读者兴趣,使其积极参与讨论

例如在写到警察是否应该持枪这篇文章时作者说 If police in the U.K. are able to go without guns and not have crime getting completely out of control then they have already set a fine example that other countries should follow. The fact that they are able to do this is an indication of their ability to control the flow of guns to the general populace and this makes citizens safer than anything else. To a civilian, taking guns away from criminals is more important than giving them to police. 提出这个有争议的话题,激发读者的兴趣,使读者积极参与到讨论中来,让大家各抒己见进行讨论。

3. 引起读者兴趣的话题

例如在写关于体罚的话题文章时,采用这样一个开头:It is reported that a boy in Zhuhai was beaten to death by his father on Father' Day. Ample evidence also shows that children who are frequently abused by their parents or teachers tend to be introverted, pessimistic, indifferent and even world-weary. Recently, there has arisen a fierce argument on whether corporal punishment should be abolished. Teachers, parents and experts take diverse attitudes towards this issue.(据报道,在父亲节那天,珠海有个小男孩被爸爸打死了。充分的证据也显示,经常遭父母或老师虐待的小孩往往比较内向、悲观、冷漠甚至厌世。近来,关于是否应该废除体罚出现了一场激烈的争论,老师、家长和老师各执一词。)当读者看到这个话题时产生了浓厚的兴趣进而引起了对这件事情的思考。

4. 呈现该话题正反方的观点

例如在写到男性和女性谁可以做更好的父母时可以这样开头:At the mere mention of women governing the world, most of us may naturally form an unrealistic picture of a more peaceful world where the sun always shines. The other side of the picture, however, is just to the opposite.

在开头提出两种不同的观点,不同的读者可以根据自己对问题的看法进行思考,从而引发读者的探究心理,进一步思考这个问题从而得出结论。

5. 引用名人名言、谚语等作为文章的开头

例如在写到先天跟后天哪一个更重要时,“Genius is two percent inspiration and ninety-eight percent perspiration” is the opinion held by Edison. This remark has been confirmed time and again by more and more people. “天才是百分之二的灵感,百分之九十八的汗水”是爱迪生的观点,而且反复被越来越多的人所证实,通过引用名人名言揭示了文章的主题,为下文很好地做了铺垫。

6. 对将要讨论的话题进行定义

例如在写到Globalization时,Globalization-the international spread of products, ideas and information-is bringing the world closer together. But globalization is not a new concept. For thousands of years, nations have roamed the earth in search of new markets and new sources of raw materials for their own industries.

关于"全球化"这个名词,考生并不陌生,但是怎样用合理的语言来赋予它一个含义,这并非易事,上述的引言段就很好地做到了这一点,先是从字面上诠释了"全球化"的定义,进而又从实际生活角度赋予了它另外一层含义。

7. 追根溯源法

即从题目给出的话题中找出这个现象产生的原因来扩展背景句。这种方法适合大多数的话题。例如There are social, medical and technical problems associated with the use of mobile phones. What forms do they take? Do you a雅思e that the problems outweigh the benefits of mobile phone? 这个题目中给出的话题是mobile phone, 所以考生可以从它产生的原因来考虑,就是科技的繁荣,而科技的繁荣,手机的广泛使用是在20世纪末,这样背景句就有内容可写了。当然要通过相应的句型来写,这个背景句就可以写成:The late 20th century witnessed the boom of science and technology, which gave rise to a series of technological innovations, including the mobile phone.

再比如另外一道题目:Nowadays, some universities offer students skills that assist them to find employment, but some people believe that the main function of a university should be to provide students with access to knowledge for its sake. What is your opinion?

这题要求大家讨论大学是提供职业技能还是传授知识。从传统观点来看,大学是传授知识的地方,为什么会提出要传授技能呢?所以这里考生也可以用追根溯源法思考一下,大家肯定可以想到是由于找工作已经成为当今教育的目的之一了,所以很多大学就转移到以传授技能为主了。As job-hunting has become one of the main purposes of university education, the majority of the universities tend to offer vocational trainings to prepare the students for their future career.

总之,写作就是通过语言表达你自己的思想。这里面有两个要素:语言和思想,对于一篇成功的写作文章来说,这两点缺一不可。以上是一些写作引言的方法供大家参考。

雅思大作文类型及技巧

第一.Argument

此类题型有三个特点,首先,话题性质是争议性的;第二,题目要求是希望可以寻求考生的看法;第三,在展开论述方面,需要评估对立双方的证据。比如下面这道例题:Some people think that secondary school students should study international news as a school subject, but others argue that it would be a waste of time of valuable school time. What is your opinion on the issue? (2013.6.22) 这个题目中询问的就是考生的观点。

第二.Report

此类话题也包括三个特点,首先,话题性质是非争议性的;第二,题目需求是希望考生可以寻求信息;第三,在展开论述方面,要求中不要求有无对立的双方。比如下面这道例题: A large number of young people are leaving school and cannot find a job. What problems will youth unemployment cause for the individual and for the society? What measures should be taken to reduce the level of unemployment among young people? (2012.8.11) 在这个题目中,考题主要询问考生对客观现象的总结和复述,而考生自己却不能有什么创造性的解答。

第三.Argument +Report 混合型

此类话题混合了argument和report的共同特点,这类型的题目看似复杂,但是很好应对。比如下面这道题目:As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual wellbeing. What factors contribute to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers? (剑7,test3)其实我们可以很容易的将题目分解,第一个问题是report,第二个问题可以将其转化为argument的典型问法在进行作答,比如可以换成The expectation of job satisfaction for all workers is realistic. Do you agree or disagree? 亦可以换成Some people think everyone can enjoy their work, while others believe that everyone expecting job satisfaction is unrealistic. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

那么,针对这三种类型,我们该如何应对呢?其实很简单,题目中问什么,我们就答什么。在前两类题型中,我们可以按照题目的特点分别用对应的方法解答,对于混合型,其实就是将两种解答方法结合在一起,其实也很容易,重要的是逻辑应该顺畅。

雅思大作文的技巧

1、雅思大作文写作需要注意写好文章框架

文章的framework即文章的结构永远是决定一篇写作是否达到要求的最重要的标准,寄一篇文章好不好,首先看的不是他的句型,词汇或者是论点等。而是段落之间的衔接一定要十分清楚,我们不能老师采用三大段的形式—开头,经过,结尾。我们可以多用用连接词,例如:first fo all,morever,secondly,lastly等,另外可以多分自然段,给考官一目了然的感觉。还有我们可以多看看国外的文章,看看他们的写作模式,这样写出来的雅思大作文才能更加贴近考官的标准。

2、雅思大作文写作技巧中,句型的多样化是非常重要的一个。

如果一篇文章,从头到尾,永远用的只有一种句型,纳闷这篇文章一定拿不到高分,我们可以适当的该换一下句型。

基本句型包括:1>主谓句2>There be 3>主表系结构的句子4>被动语态

复杂句型包括:1>并列句2>从句(定语,状语,名词性,非谓语)

3、词汇的Variety是雅思大作文写作技巧中最基础的一个,也是最难掌握的一个。

说实话做到这点真的很难,首先你要有庞大的词汇量,第二你要用的恰当,不出错误。当然大家可以累计一些固定搭配的词汇,例如:激烈的竞争fierce competition等。

4、多举example雅思大作文写作技巧中的重要组成部分。

大家不要小看这一点,对于写作基础不是很好的考生来说,这点是最重要的。一篇文章如果让你从头到尾都是在讲道理,根本没有那么多话要说。而且有时候还不一定说的清楚。那么这时候那就用例子来表明你的观点。另外考官也是很欢迎考生在雅思大作文的写作中举例证明的,因为这样更具体。

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