雅思写作提分技巧

雅思写作提分技巧。想要考过雅思，作文的分数是很关键的，想要作文拿高分，那就需要努力外加一点技巧，下面是小编整里的雅思写作提分技巧，希望能帮到你!

雅思写作提分技巧一

避免空洞的单词和词组

1.一些空洞的单词或词组根本不能为句子带来任何相关的或重要的信息，完全可以被删掉。比如下面的句子：

When all things are considered, young adults of today live more satisfying lives than those of their parents, in my opinion.

这句话当中的“when all things are considered ”和“ in my opinion “都显得多余。完全可以去掉。改为：

Young adults of today live more satisfying lives than their parents.

2.有些空洞和繁琐的表达方式可以进行替换，例如：

Due to the fact that our grandparents were under an obligation to help their parents， they did not have the options that young people have at this point in time.

“ due to the fact that ”就是一个很典型的繁琐的表达方式的例子，可以替换，简化为下面的表达方式：

Because our grandparents were obligated to help their parents, they did not have the options that young people have now.

避免重复

1.尽量避免重复使用同样的词汇。或者有的时候虽然词汇没有重复，但意思却有重复。这时候可以做一些简化的工作。例如下面这个例子：

The farm my grandfather grew up on was large in size.

large 对一个 farm 来说就是 size 方面的 large, 所以 in size 可以去掉，

改为：The farm my grandfather grew up on was large.

更简洁的表达方式为：

My grandfather grew up on a large farm.

2.有时一个词组可以用一个更简单的单词来替换，例如：

My grandfather has said over and over again that he had to work on his parents' farm.

建议这里的over and over again 就可以改为repeatedly ，显得更为简洁：

My grandfather has said repeatedly that he had to work on his parents' farm.

选择最恰当的语法结构

选择合适的语法结构可以使句子意思的表达更为精确和简练。虽然语法的多样性也很重要，但选择最恰当的语法结构仍然是更为重要的考虑因素。以下原则是在考虑选择何种语法结构时可以参考的原则：

1.一个句子的主语和谓语动词应该能够反映句子中的最重要的意思。例如： .

The situation that resulted in my grandfather's not being able to study engineering was that his father needed help on the farm.

从意思上来分析，上面这句话需要表达的重要的概念是“grandfather's not being able to study ”，而在表达这个概念时，原句用的主语是 situation ，谓语动词是 was ，不能强调需要表达的重点概念，

建议可以改为下面这句话：

My grandfather couldn't study engineering because his father needed help on the farm.

2.避免频繁使用“there be ”结构，例如下面的句子：

There were 25 cows on the farm that my grandfather had to milk every day. It was hard work for my grandfather.

可以改为：

My grandfather worked hard. He had to milk 25cows on the farm every day.

更简洁的句式为：

My grandfather worked hard milking 25 cows daily.

3.把从句改为短语或单词。例如：

Dairy cows were raised on the farm, which was located100 kilometers from the nearest university and was in an area that was remote.

简介的表达方式为：

The dairy farm was located in a remote area， 100 kilometers to the nearest university.

4.仅在需要强调宾语而不是主语的时候，才使用被动语态。例如：

In the fall, not only did the cows have to be milked， but also the hay was mowed and stacked by my grandfather's family.

本句不够简洁的原因是本句的重心应该是“忙碌的家庭 -my grandfather's family ”，而使用了被动语态后，仿佛重心变成了 cows 和 hay 。

下面的表达方式是主动语态，相对来说更简洁一些：

In the fall， my grandfather's family not only milked the cow but also mowed and stacked the hay.

5.用更为精确的一个动词来代替动词短语，例如下面这句话：

My grandfather didn't have time to stand around doing nothing with his school friends.

Stand around doing nothing 其实可以用一个动词来表达，即 loiter ：

My grandfather didn't have time to loiter with his school friends.

6.有时两句话的信息经过组合完全可以用一句话来简练地表达，例如：

Profits from the farm were not large. Sometimes they were too small to meet the expenses of running a farm. They were not sufficient to pay for a university degree.

两句话的信息可以合并为下面这句更为简洁的句子：

Profits from the farm were sometimes too small to meet operational expenses，let alone pay for a university degree.

雅思写作提分技巧二

1.一般我们尅看剑桥后面考官的范文

看他里面有哪些数据是重点介绍了的，哪些数据是被忽略的，哪些数据又是被一笔带过的。

2.切记要注意范文里面的句式变化

比如我记得当时8分里面有篇小作文是比较3个国家用水程度，她分别从一个用处，以及用水量和国家做主语要求写了3个句子，并且把3个图写完，这样的写法往往就是我们应该去学习的。还有一些名词，以及动词的交替使用，尽量可能多的向考官展示你能使用不同的句式变化，你能熟练掌握这些词的一些不同的用法。特别要注意的是范文里那种把多个数据融入一个长句子里的那种表达方法，这种写法可以说在剑桥考官的范文里多次出现，因为即节省了字数，同时又向雅思小作文考官展示了你具有的语言功底，这种句子看着的话绝对比挨着介绍来的舒服。

3.注意一个倍数以及一些“非主流”的表达方法

大家在看考官的范文和8分的时候，是不是会发现能用倍数表示的地方，他们可以说几乎都用的是倍数表示，比如在8分的第1篇小作文里面。所以如果考试的时候考题给了我们用倍数的机会，那么我们也就应该把握这个机会向我们的考官展示出来。关于我改革说的“非主流”的表达方法，其实就是说要尽量用一些有活力的词汇，以及一些句子形象的表示数据的增减变化。可以说雅思小作文里面这个表达方法是非常重要的，

4.一些容易忽略的问题

其实关于一些数据的波动，我想大家可能不太注意描述这个趋势，一般描述的哈也是用fluctuate带过，但曾经有个老外给我说过，在一篇line chart里，大部分可以说都是上升，下降，句式无论再怎么变就那些，所以要是如果出现波动的情况，你们就该好好描述一下，这其实也是个向考官展示的机会，比如一个数据的趋势一直处于下降的状态，但是它在某时间段内有回升，那么我们可以说这个回升not strong enough to resist the downtrend.或者可以说这个数据consistently decrease and occasionally increase.往往这些都是比较新颖的，比你用fluctuate描述肯定要好。

雅思写作提分技巧三

要知道雅思写作考试中最主要考察大家的是什么，肯定很多同学会说是语法，词汇或英语的运用能力等，不可否认，这些知识对雅思写作非常的关键，但通过我这么多年的雅思写作的教学经验来说，我认为最重要的是要写出真正的英语，也就是说尽量少出现中式英语的东西，也就是我们常说的“Chinglish”。那如何能在短时间内避免出现中式英语的错误呢，比较好的方法就是多收集这方面的材料，不要犯类似的错误。下面是一些同学在写作中经常犯的一些错误，还有我的分析，希望对大家能有所帮助。

1. 概念的错误

在写作中，有类词语表面上看似乎是对的,但实际上却没有表达出你想要表达的意思,有时恰恰适得其反。用这类词语写成的英语句子常常引起误解。

① (误)When we go into society after graduation, we will encounter many difficulties.

(正)When we start to work after graduation, we will encounter many difficulties.

“go into society”没有汉语“进入社会”的含义。在西方,它是指一个人到一定的年龄可以开始社会交往,如结交异性朋友,进入某些社交或公共场所等。而汉语“进入社会”一般指学生中学或大学毕业后参加工作。

② (误)Left alone in the jungle at night ,she felt very dangerous.

(正)Left alone in the jungle at night, she felt t hat she was in great danger.

“dangerous”与作者要表达的意思完全相反。说某人dangerous,实际上是说他在某一方面对某人构成危胁,而不是处于危险的境地。这个词用错,意思就完全变了。原意是“她”感到处于危险中。

2、搭配不当

用词搭配是我国学生学英语最感棘手的地方,在雅思写作中，这种错误也是经常出现的，所以希望大家引起重视，因为中文里的某些词语在不同的语境里,英语有不同的说法,而这些说法是约定俗成的,完全是习惯用法所致,我们稍有不慎,便会犯错。现举一些考生在考试中常犯的错误:

① (误)At college, we should learn as much knowledge as possible so t hat we can be well prepared for our future career.

(正)At college, we should acquire as much knowledge as possible so t hat we can be well prepared for our future career.

“学习知识”是学生写作时经常用到的词组,但不少学生都写成learn knowledge,实际上knowledge是不能与learn搭配的,只能与acquire,obtain,absorb,accumulate ,develop,advance,gain,broaden ,enlarge,impart,derive ，deepen, brush up, digest 等词搭配使用。

② (误)In July, they will take part in the final term examinations.

(正)In July, they will take t he final term examinations.

“examination”或“test”不能与“take part in”搭配使用,但可以和attend, have, sit for

,conduct, enter for, get through, pass, fail等词语用在一起。

3、用词累赘

由于对某些词和词组的意思缺乏真正的理解或把要表达的意思先用中文想好,然后逐字翻译成英语,造成累赘。例如:

① (误)In my opinion, I think t he production and sale of fake commodities should be

banned.

(正)I think t he production and sale of fake commodities should be banned.

in my opinion与I think意思完全相同,可以删去其中的一个。

② (误)Scientists are trying to find a solution to solve t he problem of energy shortage .

(正)Scientist s are trying to find a solution to t he problem of energy shortage.

一个词与它的派生词一起出现,造成意思重复,给人以累赘的感觉,改正后的句子变得简洁多了。

③ (误)Waste gas is t he main cause which leads to air pollution .

(正)Waste gas is t he main cause of air pollution.

cause和lead to都表原因,同时使用造成意思重复。

4、逗号连接错误

中国学生在英语写作中常常单独使用逗号而不用句号、分号、冒号或连结词来连接两个或几个独立的分句。例如:

① (误)The weather was fine, we decided to climb t he mountain.

(正)As the weather was fine, we decided to climb t he mountain.

② (误)The [wv]prospects[/vw] are bright, the road has twists and turns.

(正)While t he prospects are bright, the road has twists and turns.

上面两个标有误的句子在语法上没有错误,它错就错在逗号的使用不当。错误的根源是学生受汉语写作习惯的影响,把汉语逗号的作用等同于英语逗号的作用。在汉语中,逗号可以单独使用在并列分句之间。

(1)变成两个简单句:

The wind was blow ing very hard. They couldn’t go boating on t he lake.

(2)变成并列句,用逗号加并列连接:

The wind was blowing very hard they couldn’t go boating on t he lake.

(3)变成并列句,用分号连接:

The wind was blowing very hard; couldn’t go boating on t he lake.

(4)变成并列句,用分号加连接性副连接:

The wind was blowing very hard ,therefore, they couldn’t go boating on lake.

(5)变成并列句,有时也可以用冒接,这时第二个分句解释说明第一个分句

They couldn’t go boating on the lake; the wind was blowing very hard.

(6)变成复合句:

As the wind was blowing very hard they couldn’t go boating on t he lake.

(7)用独立主格结构改写句子:

The wind blowing very hard, they couldn’t go boating on t he lake.

雅思写作提分技巧四

首先，雅思写作中状语前置的句式是有助于拿分的。将一个修饰动词的状语结构，如介词短语，动词短语，名词短语及不定式等放在句首。使用状语前置的优点是可以让单调的句子有节奏感。

第二，尝试使用插入语。插入语是英语水平的一种体现，若能在写作中适当加入一些插入语的话，可以让英文表达更加自然，更加地道。

第三，尝试使用倒装句，即把谓语动词提前到主语之前。大部分雅思考生对于倒装句仅仅是认识，而不能很好的距离运用。因此，如果能适当的在雅思考试中运用，能给雅思考官们耳目一新的感觉。

最后，被动的运用。由于中式思维的影响，很多雅思考生在写作时更倾向于使用主动语态的句子，然而，纯正的英文中被动的使用比比皆是。所以，建议雅思考生们多使用含有被动语态的句子。