雅思大作文——解决问题型之原因段

雅思大作文——解决问题型之原因段
原因段

　　广州环球雅思资讯 在原因段的论述中，建议考生们在每列举一个原因后记得用示例或者因果对于列举的原因继续展开讨论。每个原因间用列举的连词隔开。比如：

　　In my opinion, most people commit crimes because they want something they cannot have. Advertising intensifies the desire for luxury goods and celebrity lifestyles, and although it is necessary to promote sales and improve the economy, it can encourage feelings of greed and jealousy. In addition to this, young people especially are vulnerable to peer pressure. For instance, they may be influenced by their friends to start taking drugs or stealing cars for fun.

　　在上面这个例子中，作者罗列了犯罪的2个原因，即贪婪和同辈的压力。在原因表达以后，作者分别各自用了一个因果和例子来继续发展。请注意，第一个原因后的那个句子是解释贪婪的原因，属于因果法;而第二个原因后作者是通过举例的方式来进一步论述。

　　Otherwise-good people are sometimes unlucky and put in situations where they feel crime is the only option. I think that the most common cases are needing money. This could be to fuel drug habits, support a family or nothing except pure greed. Bad upbringing is often argued as a cause. For example, if a child sees parents or other adults using violence, they may be more likely to think it is acceptable to use violence as an answer to problems.

　　As I see it, the main reason aid money is ineffective is corruption. In developing countries, civil servants, teachers and policemen are paid so little that they are unable to live on their salaries. For this reason, they are forced to take money for favors, and as a result, money goes missing before it can reach the people it is intended for. Consequently, the gap between rich and poor becomes wider, and so we see tyrants and dictators living in palaces while their people starve.

　　上述段落只论述了一个原因，即富国提供给穷国的资金为什么得不到很好的利用的原因是腐败。在原因表达后，作者先用了一个举例，这个举例其实也可以当作腐败的原因，即原因的原因。然后作者继续讨论原因导致的结果。请注意，若原因段只讨论一个原因的话，考虑到篇幅的因素，必须通过举例加因果的组合对本段论述的原因作深入的讨论。

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