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雅思大作文提分技巧

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雅思大作文提分技巧

雅思大作文提分技巧。大作文一直考不好?你需要一些技巧来提高你作文的分数,下面是小编整理的雅思大作文提分技巧,欢迎阅读!

雅思大作文提分技巧一

巧用近义词或同义词

为了体现良好的英语功底,应尽量避免重复使用同样的词汇,为此,可以巧用近义词或同义词。

Example:

优势:Advantage, merit, virtue, benefit, upside, strength

缺点:Disadvantage, demerit, drawback, downside, weakness

重要的:Key, crucial, critical, important, significant, vital, substantial, indispensable

认为:Think, believe, insist, maintain, assert, conclude, deem, hold, argue

“优点”,“缺点”,“重要的”等这些词汇在写作时经常出现,同学们可以记住下它们的近义词或同义词词组。

巧用倒装句

我们先来看以下几个例子:

1) The parents should spend time on their children,they should also communicate with them.

2) We can never lose sight of the significance of education.

以上两句话都没有任何错误,但是读来非常平淡,没有任何特色,如果我们用倒装句,出来的效果就完全不一样了。

1) Not only should parents spend time on their children,they are also advised to interact with them.

2) On no account / by no means / in no way can we lose sight of the significance of education.

避免语法错误

下面是常见的语法错误,写完作文如果有时间大伙可以检查下语法,避免造成丢分。

1.可数名词永远不能单独使用,必须在前面加上一个限定词,如 the/an/a/this/my ;或者复数

2.英语里动词不能做主语,被动的动词别忘了加-ed/-d

3.主谓要一致。主语很长一定要检查谓语单复数

4.Many students are like studying home economics . 只有情态动词可以加动词原形,like是动词,要去掉are

5.时态要一致,议论文极少用过去时

6.修饰名词用形容词,修饰动词用副词或者形容词

7.介词搭配:reasons for …;solutions for …

8.动词替代:replace/ supplant

;instead of 是副词或者连词

9.there are 句型后面的名词再加动词,动词不能原形

10.can’t应写成cannot , 注意没有空格 。

11.修饰可数名词:numerous , a host of , a vast number of ;不可数:a great deal of

12英-se结尾 , 美-ze ;英-our 结尾,美-or

13.口头语和书面语要点区分开。serious→ severe ;people → individuals ;harm→ damage ;more and more→ increasingly; so→therefore/ hence/ thus;be more than → outweigh 大于/超过,最常用的一句advantages outweigh disadvantages greatly 利远大于弊。

14.慎重引用句子,有些如宗教句子不能直接来做论据

15.不要轻易使用语气过于强烈的句子

雅思大作文提分技巧二

一、 长短句结合

工作还得一张一驰呢,老让读者读长句,累死人!写一个短小精辟的句子,相反,却可以起到画龙点睛的作用。而且如果我们把短句放在段首或者段末,也可以揭示主题:

As a creature, I eat; as a man, I read. Although one action is tomeet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy theintellectual need of mind, they are in a way quite similar。

如此可见,长短句结合,抑扬顿挫,岂不爽哉?牢记!

强烈建议:在文章第一段(开头)用一长一短,且先长后短;在文章主体部分,要先用一个短句解释主要意思,然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式,定会让主体部分妙笔生辉!文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。

二、 主题句突出

国有其君,家有其主,文章也要有其主。否则会给人造成“群龙无首”之感!相信各位读过一些破烂文学,故意把主体隐藏在文章之内,结果造成我们稀里糊涂!不知所云!所以奉劝各位一定要写一个主题句,放在文章的开头(保险型)或者结尾,让读者一目了然,必会平安无事!

特别提示:隐藏主体句可是要冒险的!

To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fullyprepared before the exam(主题句). Without sufficient preparation, youcan hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly。

三、 条理清晰

领导讲话总是第一部分、第一点、第二点、第三点、第二部分、第一点…如此罗嗦。可毕竟还是条理清楚。考官们看文章也必然要通过这些关键性的“标签”来判定你的文章是否结构清楚,条理自然。破解方法很简单,只要把下面任何一组的词汇加入到你的几个要点前就清楚了。

1)first, second, third, last(不推荐,原因:俗)

2)firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally(不推荐,原因:俗)

3)the first, the second, the third, the last(不推荐,原因:俗)

4)in the first place, in the second place, in the third place,lastly(不推荐,原因:俗)

5)to begin with, then, furthermore, finally(强烈推荐)

6)to start with, next, in addition, finally(强烈推荐)

7)first and foremost, besides, last but not least(强烈推荐)

8)most important of all, moreover, finally

9)on the one hand, on the other hand(适用于两点的情况)

10)for one thing, for another thing(适用于两点的情况)

建议:不仅仅在写作中注意,平时说话的时候也应该条理清楚!

四、 短语优先

写作时,尤其是在考试时,如果使用短语,有两个好处:其一、用短语会使文章增加亮点,如果老师们看到你的文章太简单,看不到一个自己不认识的短语,必然会看你低一等。相反,如果发现亮点—精彩的短语,那么你的文章定会得高分了。其二、关键时刻思维短路,只有凑字数,怎么办?用短语是一个办法!比如:

I cannot bear it。

可以用短语表达:I cannot put up with it。

I want it。

可以用短语表达:I am looking forward to it。

这样字数明显增加,表达也更准确。

五、 多实少虚

原因很简单,写文章还是应该写一些实际的东西,不要空话连篇。这就要求一定要多用实词,少用虚词。我这里所说的虚词就是指那些比较大的词。比如我们说一个很好的时候,不应该之说nice这样空洞的词,应该使用一些诸如generous, humorous, interesting,smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospital 之类的形象词。再比如:

走出房间,general的词是:walk out of the room

但是小偷走出房间应该说:slip out of the room

小姐走出房间应该说:sail out of the room

小孩走出房间应该说:dance out of the room

老人走出房间应该说:stagger out of the room

所以多用实词,少用虚词,文章将会大放异彩!

六、 多变句式

1)加法(串联)

都希望写下很长的句子,像个老外似的,可就是怕写错,怎么办,比较保险的写长句的方法就是这些,可以在任何句子之间加and,但比较好是前后的句子又先后关系或者并列关系。比如说:

I enjor music and he is fond of playing guitar。

如果是二者并列的,我们可以用一个超级句式:

Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also warm。

其它的短语可以用:

besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover

2)转折(拐弯抹角)

批评某人缺点的时候,我们总习惯先拐弯抹角说说他的优点,然后转入正题,再说缺点,这种方式虽然阴险了点,可毕竟还比较容易让人接受。  所以呢,我们说话的时候,只要在要点之前先来点废话,注意二者之间用个专这次就够了。

The car was quite old, yet it was in excellent condition。

The coat was thin, but it was warm。

更多的短语:

despite that, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of, despite,notwithstanding

3)因果(so, so, so)

昨天在街上我看到了一个女孩,然后我主动搭讪,然后我们去咖啡厅,然后我们认识了,然后我们成为了朋友…可见,讲故事的时候我们总要追求先后顺序,先什么,后什么,所以然后这个词就变得很常见了。其实这个词表示的是先后或因果关系!

The snow began to fall, so we went home。

更多短语:

then, therefore, consequently, accordingly, hence, as a result,for this reason, so that

4)失衡句(头重脚轻,或者头轻脚重)

有些人脑袋大,身体小,或者有些人脑袋小,身体大,虽然我们不希望长成这个样子,可如果真的是这样了,也就必然会吸引别人的注意力。文章中如果出现这样的句子,就更会让考官看到你的句子与众不同。其实就是主语从句,表语从句,宾语从句的变形。

举例:This is what I can do。

Whether he can go with us or not is not sure。

同样主语、宾语、表语可以改成如下的复杂成分:

When to go, Why he goes away…

5)附加(多此一举)

如果有了老婆,总会遇到这样的情况,当你再讲某个人的时候,她会插一句说,我昨天见过他;或者说,就是某某某,如果把老婆的话插入到我们的话里面,那就是定语从句和同位语从句或者是插入语。

The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine。

I don’t enjoy that book you are reading。

Mr liu, our oral English teacher, is easy-going。

其实很简单,同位语--要解释的东西删除后不影响整个句子的构成;定语从句—借用之前的关键词并且用其重新组成一个句子插入其中,但是whomor that 关键词必须要紧跟在先行词之前。

6)排比(排山倒海句)

文学作品中最吸引人的地方莫过于此,如果非要让你的文章更加精彩的话,那么我希望你引用一个个的排比句,一个个得对偶句,一个个的不定式,一个个地词,一个个的短语,如此表达将会使文章有排山倒海之势!

Whether your tastes are modern or traditional, sophisticated orsimple, there is plenty in London for you。

Nowadays, energy can be obtained through various sources such asoil, coal, natural gas, solar heat, the wind and ocean tides。

We have got to study hard, to enlarge our scope of knowledge, torealize our potentials and to pay for our life. (气势恢宏)

要想写出如此气势恢宏的句子非用排比不可!

七、 挑战极限

既然是挑战极限,必然是比较难的,但是并非不可攀!

原理:在学生的文章中,很少发现诸如独立主格的句子,其实也很简单,只要花上5分钟的时间看看就可以领会,它就是分词的一种特殊形式,分词要求主语一致,而独立主格则不然。比如:

The weather being fine, a large number of people went to climbthe Western Hills。

Africa is the second largest continent, its size being aboutthree times that of China。

雅思大作文提分技巧三

1名词动用

The Internet is beginning to rival newspapers as the best place to find information about what is happening in the world.

此句选自于文化类的一篇考官范文,注意打单横线的rival 这一词, 相信大部分同学见到这一单词之后第一反应是他的名词含义, 竞争者的意思。 但通过基本语法做分析后大家会发现, rival在这里为动词用法, 翻译过来为与…竞争。 Rival的动词用法在这里就是我们所说的less common vocabulary。 同rival相似的, 以下例句中划横线的词都运用了名词动用的表达, 大家可自行体会。

a.People began to harbor doubts over the function of university. (harbor – v. 持有,怀有)

b.Education should shape students minds and broaden their horizons. (shape-v. 塑造)

c.Each government needs to tailor a solution to solve the problem of environmental degradation. (tailor- v. 定制)

2形容词动用

同样的, 形容词动用便是把我们最常见的一个单词的形容词用法转化为动词。 分析下一句子:

National and International fixed line calls grew steadily from 38 billion to 61 billion at the end of the period in question, though the growth slowed over the last two years.

此句选自与一篇考官的小作文范文, 很多同学在赏析的过程中会漏掉slow这一词的用法。 分析后发现slow在这里用作了动词用法, 同时此处的词性转化让slow这个简单词汇的用法变得不简单了。 以下为写作中的形容词动用的例句, 大家可以做参考:

a.This rise was particularly noticeable between 1999 and 2002, during which time the use of mobile phones tripled. (triple- v. 三倍增长)

b.The best way to perfect your English is to live in a country where it’s spoken. (perfect-v. 使完美)

3话题词汇

很多同学相信在写文章做句子衔接的过程中, 总是极力避免使用Firstly, Secondly 及Finally 这类衔接词。觉得把他们换为moreover, Furthermore 及In addition 就会更高端一些。 实际不然, Firstly使用起来的效果同moreover无异。 两个词都是linking words 使用时都会起到衔接上下文的作用, 在难度上并没有差异。 考官的范文中也出现过firstly的用法。 换句话来说, 同学们后期及词汇的过程中, 像是firstly这类衔接词不需要花大量的时间做文章, 相反的一些topic words是我们关注的重点。

什么是topic words, 比如我们在大作文中最常见的教育话题, 其中会涉及到children这个主体。 说到children好多同学想到他就会给出youngster, adolescent及youth这类词, 虽然词看起来有难度, 但表达并不准确。 考官在范文中表述时, 就用了the next/younger generation 来替代children。 这里面的the next/younger generation就是我们所说的topic words。 所用表达不难, 但很适合我们所写的教育类话题。 下文中大家所看到的就是在教育类话题中可以用得到的topic words , 可有意识的做积累, 后期运用到自己的文章中。

教育类词汇:

Career prospects

Generate personal wealth

Moral education

Behavioral problems

Academic performance

Core subject

Moral principles

Behavioral norms

Have a direct association with…

Enhance / boost intelligence

Foster the culture of cooperation

雅思大作文提分技巧四

一、表示原因

1、There are three reasons for this.

2、The reasons for this are as follows.

3、The reason for this is obvious.

4、The reason for this is not far to seek.

5、The reason for this is that...

6、We have good reason to believe that...

例如:

There are three reasons for the changes that have taken place in our life. Firstly, people’s living standard has been greatly improved. Secondly, most people are well paid, and they can afford what they need or like. Last but not least, more and more people prefer to enjoy modern life.

注:如考生写第一个句子没有把握,可将其改写成两个句子。如:Great changes have taken place in our life. There are three reasons for this. 这样写可以避免套用中的表达失误。

二、 表示好处

1、It has the following advantages.

2、It does us a lot of good.

3、It benefits us quite a lot.

4、It is beneficial to us.

5、It is of great benefit to us.

例如:

Books are like friends. They can help us know the world better, and they can open our minds and widen our horizons. Therefore, reading extensively is of great benefit to us.

三、表示坏处

1、It has more disadvantages than advantages.

2、It does us much harm.

3、It is harmful to us.

例如:

However, everything divides into two. Television can also be harmful to us. It can do harm to our health and make us lazy if we spend too much time watching television.

四、表示重要、必要、困难、方便、可能

1、It is important(necessary, difficult, convenient, possible、for sb. to do sth.

2、We think it necessary to do sth.

3、It plays an important role in our life.

例如:

Computers are now being used everywhere, whether in the government, in schools or in business. Soon, computers will be found in every home, too. We have good reason to say that computers are playing an increasingly important role in our life and we have stepped into the Computer Age.

五、表示措施

1、We should take some effective measures.

2、We should try our best to overcome (conquer、 the difficulties.

3、We should do our utmost in doing sth.

4、We should solve the problems that we are confronted(faced、with.

例如:

The housing problem that we are confronted with is becoming more and more serious. Therefore, we must take some effective measures to solve it.

六、表示变化

1、Some changes have taken place in the past five years.

2、A great change will certainly be produced in the world’s communications.

3、The computer has brought about many changes in education.

例如:

Some changes have taken place in people’s diet in the past five years. The major reasons for these changes are not far to seek. Nowadays, more and more people are switching from grain to meat for protein, and from fruit and vegetable to milk for vitamins.

七、表示事实、现状

1、We cannot ignore the fact that...

2、No one can deny the fact that...

3、There is no denying the fact that...

4、This is a phenomenon that many people are interested in.

5、However, that’s not the case.

例如:

We cannot ignore the fact that industrialization brings with it the problems of pollution. To solve these problems, we can start by educating the public about the hazards of pollution. The government on its part should also design stricter laws to promote a cleaner environment.

八、 表示比较

1、Compared with A, B...

2、I prefer to read rather than watch TV.

3、There is a striking contrast between them.

例如:

Compared with cars, bicycles have several advantages besides being affordable. Firstly, they do not consume natural resources of petroleum. Secondly, they do not cause the pollution problem. Last but not least, they contribute to people’s health by giving them due physical exercise.

九、表示数量

1、It has increased (decreased、 from...to...

2、The population in this city has now increased (decreased、 to 800,000.

3、The output of July in this factory increased by 15% compared with that of January.

例如:

With the improvement of the living standard, the proportion of people’s income spent on food has decreased while that spent on education has increased.

再如:

From the graph listed above, it can be seen that student use of computers has increased from an average of less than two hours per week in 1990 to 20 hours in 2000.

十、表示看法

1、People have (take, adopt, assume、 different attitudes towards sth.

2、People have different opinions on this problem.

3、People take different views of (on、 the question.

4、Some people believe that...Others argue that...

例如:

People have different attitudes towards failure. Some believe that failure leads to success.

Every failure they experience translates into a greater chance of success at their renewed endeavor. However, others are easily discouraged by failures and put themselves into the category of losers.

再如:

Do “lucky numbers” really bring good luck? Different people have different views on it.

注:一个段落有时很适宜以问句开始,考生应掌握这一写作方法。

十一、表示结论

1、In short, it can be said that ...

2、It may be briefly summed up as follows.

3、From what has been mentioned above, we can come to the conclusion that ...

例如:

From what has been mentioned above, we can come to the conclusion that examination is necessary, however, its method should be improved.

注:例句1可用于任何一个段落的结论句;例句3则多用于文章结论段的第一句。

十二、套语

1、It’s well known to us that ...

2、As is known to us, ...

3、This is a topic that is being widely talked about.

4、From the graph (table,chart、 listed above,it can be seen that ...

5、As a proverb says, “Where there is a will, there is a way”.

例如:

As is well known to us, it is important for the students to know the world outside campus.

The reason for this is obvious. Nowadays, the society is changing and developing rapidly, and the campus is no longer an “ivory tower”. As college students, we must get in touch with the world outside the campus. Only in this way can we adapt ourselves to the society quickly after we graduate.

再如:

Does it pay to be honest? This is a topic that is being widely talked about and different people have different opinions on it.

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