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雅思写作开头段怎么写

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雅思写作开头段怎么写

在雅思考试中,雅思写作对于不太擅长逻辑架构的大陆考生来说是取得高分的一大门槛,与雅思考试中的其他几项相比较,写作往往是得分较低的一项。下面小编告诉你雅思写作开头段怎么写,大家一起来看看吧!

雅思写作开头段怎么写:

开头篇

很多同学写开头都陷入了一种典型的模板化趋势,我们先来看一道2012年的真题:

Some people think that government should establish free libraries in each town.

While others believe that it is a waste of money since people can obtain information from the internet at home. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

拿到这个题目,不少烤鸭笔下的开头是这样的:

Nowadays, the human society is progressing rapidly on various fronts. Yet at the same time, whether government should establish free libraries in each town has sparked much debate. Some people think government should establish free libraries in each town , while others believe that it is a waste of money since people can obtain information from the internet at home. Personally, I am in favor of the former view.

不知道有没有同学“躺枪”,写这种开头的同学,分数绝对不可能高于5.5,整个开头几乎可以说是在“自杀”,除了套模板,就是照搬原题,考官拿到这种开头是绝对不会有好印象的。 那真正好的开头是什么样子的呢?好的开头又好在哪儿呢?我们一起来研究一篇剑8的TEST1中剑桥考官的给出的范文,先来看一下题目:

Some parents think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

考官范文的开头是这样的:

A child’s education has never been about learning information and basic skills only. It has always included teaching the next generation how to be good members of society. Therefore, this cannot be the responsibility of the parents alone.

从这篇考官范文的开头,我们不难看出,它并没有模式化的“社会背景引入---提出正方观点---再提出反方观点---最后陈述自己观点”,而是只作了两件事

一:给核心名词下定义。

在本文中,即是给child’s education下了个定义,谈了一下在作者看来,child’s education是什么样的。

二:表明观点或立场。

在本文中,即阐明孩子的教育问题不仅仅只关乎家长。 所以,好的开头可以“无模板,但有逻辑。” 翻翻剑桥雅思考官的范文,我们会发现很多考官在开头段都只干了两件事:下定义+ 表明观点,或者是引出背景+表明观点,甚至很多考官只干了一件事,即引出背景,仅此而已。

雅思作文如何撰写开头段:

要素一:现象句

雅思写作考题中会出现一个社会现象,考生的任务就是在自己文章的第一句话将之改写,重述这个社会现象。

E.g. 1

Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

It is true that in almost every country today each household and family produces a large amount of waste every week.

套句+同义词替换:more and more= a large amount of

E.g. 2

Some people believe that children should be allowed to stay at home and play until they are six or seven years old. Others believe that it is important for young children to go to school as soon as possible.

What do you think are the advantages of attending school from a young age?

In many places today, children start primary school at around the age of six or seven.

主被动之间的转换:should be allowed to stay at home = start their primary school

同义词的替换:until they are six or seven years old = at the age of six or seven

E.g. 3

In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people to do this.

It is quite common these days for young people in many countries to have a break from studying after graduating from high school.

主被动之间的转换,以及同义替换:finish high school = graduate from high school

所以,从上文中可以看出,一般来说,现象句会在最开始加上一个套句,并且加上地点和时间。

雅思大作文开头段经典套句:

1.It is true that... ...是真实的

2.I tend to agree that… 我同意…

3.It is quite common… …是常见的

4.There is no doubt that… …是毫无疑问的

5.There is no denying that… …是毫无疑问的

6.It is undeniable that… …是毫无疑问的

地点:in many places; in many countries; in many big cities; almost every country/ city/ place

时间:in recent decades/ years; today; these days; recently; nowadays

要素二:点到问题

雅思大作文考题分成两种:report & argumentative。

对于report(题目一般会涉及到why do you think it is important to…; how do you think people can tackle this problem.)

E.g. 4

In many countries schools have severe problems with student behavior.

What do you think are the cause of this?

What solutions can you suggest?

Poor student behavior seems to be increasingly widespread problem and I think that modern lifestyles are probably responsible for this.

点到了causes--直接把原因泛泛的带领出来,全文的第二段再开始慢慢细致的描述。

E.g. 5

Happiness is considered to be very important in life.

Why is it difficult to define?

What factors are important in achieving happiness?

Happiness is very difficult to define, because it means so many different things to different people. While some people link happiness to wealth and material success, others think it lies in emotions and loving personal relationships. Yet others think that spiritual paths, rather than either the material world or relationships with people, are the only way to true happiness.

点到了why difficult--通过引用两组不同人的观点,把造成这个现象的原因大致导出,与上一个例子有异曲同工之妙。

对于argumentative(do you agree or disagree? ; discuss both views and give your opinion. ; is it a positive or negative development?),这种题型基本上都问了作者的观点,所以在开头段落的描写过程中没什么特别大的区别。

怎样写好雅思写作的开头:

1. When asked about…, most people say… But many other people regard…as… I personally think…

当被问及对……有什么看法时,大多数人认为……但是,还有很多人认为……我个人认为……

2. When it comes to…, some people think that… Others argue that the opposite is true. There is probably some truth to both arguments, but…

涉及……这一问题,有的人认为应该……另一些人持相反意见。也许双方的观点都有一定道理,但是……

3. It is widely acknowledged that…contributed to… Experts argue that China must introduce… But I doubt whether…alone will solve the problem。

人们普遍认为……老师认为中国必须推行……但我对仅仅……就能解决问题表示怀疑。

4. An increasing number of people are joining… In reaction to the phenomenon, some say… But do they realize that…can also lead to…

越来越多的人……进入了……针对这一现象,一些人认为……但是,他们有没有意识到……也能导致……

5. One of the pressing problem facing our nation (China) today is…and…

我们国家(中国)如今面临的紧迫问题之一是……

6. Perhaps the most dangerous phenomenon gripping the nation today is…

也许当今困扰国家的最危险的现象是……

7. Never before in history has the issue of…been more evident than now。

历史上,……的问题从来没有比现在更加突出。

8. Perhaps it is time to reexamine the idea that…

也许现在是应该重新考虑……的时候了。

9. A growing number of people are beginning to realize that…is not the sole prerequisite for happiness。

越来越多的人开始意识到……并不是幸福的惟一条件。

10. Years of observing human behavior has enabled me to conclude that the major difference between…and…lies solely with…

对人们行为的多年观察使我能够得出这样的结论:……和……的主要区别仅仅在于……

11. There has been undesirable trend in recent years towards… A recent survey showed that…percent of respondents ranked…as their top priority, compared to…percent only a few years ago. Why do people fail to realize that…?

近年来出现了对社会有害的……倾向。最近的一项调查表明,……的调查对象把……作为他们的首选,相比之下,就在几年前,只有……的人这样想。为什么人们没能意识到……不一定带来幸福呢?

12. I recently read a newspaper article on… The deplorable problem of…has aroused public concern nationwide。

最近,我在报纸上读到一篇关于……的文章。……的问题令人深感遗憾,它已经引起了全国公众的关注。

13. Judging from the reams of evidence presented, we can safely conclude that…

根据现有的大量证据,我们可以有把握地得出这样的结论:……

14.Along with the development of…, more and more…

随着……的发展,越来越多……

15.In the past few years, there has been a sharp growth/boom/decline in…

在过去几年内,……有显著增长/激增/明显滑坡……

雅思写作开头句型分享:

1、我们的生活已离不开…

We can not imagine our life without (the mobile phone).

2、我们随处都可以看到…/使用…

(An increasing use of machines) is now being witnessed everywhere.

(Fast food such as KFC and Mcdonald's)now could be found everywhere.

3、…已成为一个不断增长的趋势。

(Urbanization) has established itself as a growing trend.

There emerged a growing trend that (people are pouring into urban areas).

4、越来越多的人选择…/倾向于认为…

More and more people are choosing (to study abroad).

More and more people tend to believe that (more risks than benefits have been brought by air travel).

5、…已经不再罕见

It is not uncommon to see that (female leaders are playing an equally important role as their male counterparts in various areas).

It is not uncommon to see (people performing everyday task and even working at home).

6、人们开始意识到…

People are beginning to realize (the side effects of television on family relationship).

7、在几十年前,…很少有人会想象到…

Several decades ago, few people could have imagined that (our life would have changed so greatly due to the use of Internet).

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