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雅思作文的开头技巧

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雅思作文的开头技巧

雅思作文的开头技巧。雅思大作文的写作来说非常重要。很多雅思考官讲过,他们最在乎的就是作文的第一段,因为通过首段建立的起的第一印象。如果这个印象好的话,就会引起考官继续关注接下来的内容的兴趣。下面是小编整理的雅思作文的开头技巧,欢迎阅读!

雅思作文的开头技巧一

1. 采用“媒体报道”引出话题,把问题呈现在读者面前,引起读者思考

例如在写关于该不该禁烟的话题时,可以这样开头:A recent study conducted by Zhongshan University has found that the number of smokers has been increasing sharply over the pastfive years. Research findings also reveal that the incidence of smoking-relatedconditions has soared. As a result, the ban on smoking has been in the spotlight.

评析:这个开头通过媒体报道把吸烟问题呈现在读者面前,从而引出吸烟比例急剧上升造成的危害,引发思考。

再例如在写“关于是否应该体罚”的话题文章时,采用这样一个开头:

It isreported that a boy in Zhuhai wasbeaten to death by his father on Father' Day.Ampleevidence also shows thatchildren who are frequently abused by their parents or teachers tend to beintroverted(内向),pessimistic(悲观),indifferent (冷漠)and even world-weary(厌世). Recently, there has arisen a fierce argument on whether corporalpunishment should be abolished. Teachers, parents and experts take diverse attitudes towards this issue.

评析:当考官看到这个贴近生活的具体事例时,会产生浓厚的兴趣,从而引发对这件事情的思考。

2.呈现一个观点的两面

例如在写到“学校和父母在教育孩子成为合格公民时,谁的责任更大”这样的话题,可以这么写:Achild’s education has never been about learning information and basic skills only.It has always always included teaching the next generation how to be good members of society.Therefore, this can not be the responsibility of theparents alone.

评析:在开头提出立意之观点的两方面(不是···,而是···),通过不同的思考来丰富开头段的内容。

3.引用名人名言、谚语等作为文章的开头

例如在写到“先天跟后天哪一个更重要”时,可以采用这样的开头:“Genius is twopercent inspiration and ninety-eight percent perspiration” is the opinion held byEdison.This remark has been confirmed time and again by more and more people.

评析:通过引用名人名言揭示了文章的主题,为下文很好地做了铺垫。

4.对将要讨论的话题进行定义

例如在写到Globalization时,可以写成:Globalization is the international spread of products,ideas and information-is bringing the world closer together. But globalization is not a new concept. For thousands of years, nations have roamed the earth insearch of new markets and new sources of raw materials for their ownindustries.

评析:先是从字面上诠释了"全球化"的定义,进而又从历史的角度赋予了它另外一层含义,显得丰富而有层次感。

5.执果索因法

例如让大家讨论“大学应该更多地提供职业技能还是传授知识”时,可以写成:Job-hunting has become one of the main purposes of university education,the majority of the universities tend to offer vocational training to preparethe students for their future career.In my opinion, universities should...

评析:从传统观点来看,大学是传授知识的地方,为什么会提出要传授技能呢?所以这里考生也可以用追根溯源法思考一下,大家肯定可以想到是由于找工作已经成为当今教育的目的之一了,所以很多大学就转移到以传授技能为主了。这个开头的成功之处在于第一句话即表明观点,再说理。

雅思作文的开头技巧二

雅思小作文开头段的“标准动作”就是改写题目。接受过培训的学生都能熟练使用“三改一去掉”的方法。

比如:The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. ( 剑7-Test 2 P. 53)

三改分别是改主语,动词和时间状语;去掉是要把below 去掉。于是改成如下句子:

The line chart illustrates the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country during the 25 years from 1979.

这种改法比较好能够搭配句子中其他部分的适当替换。

比如:The line chart illustrates the quantity of fish and three kinds of meat consumed in a European country during the 25 years from 1979.

如果考生只会使用“三改一去掉”的技巧, 就很有可能留给考官一个“less skillful”(缺乏技术含量)的印象。然而,同义词替换的能力涉及到学生平时的积累,基础差的同学一到考场紧张的环境下往往是脑子一片空白,根本无法想到合适的词来替换。

这里提供一个可以事先练习掌握,也可以适用于90%以上小作文题目的改写技巧:改变句子的语法结构。

通过研究大量雅思小作文的真题,我们发现绝大部分题目语法结构都是最基础的主谓宾结构即The graph (主语) shows (谓语) the consumption…

翻译成中文就是“某某图表””显示”了“…的量”。而“…的量”在中文里其实都是可以说成“多少…”的

如:“这张图标显示了一个欧洲国家在1979年到2004年间消耗了多少鱼和其他肉类”。这刚好和英语中用how much引导的宾语从句“不谋而合”。说到宾语从句,这里得插一句,很多同学一想到宾语从句,只能想到以that引导的宾从,其实这不过是诸多宾语从句中的一种,用疑问代词引导的宾语从句就是宾语从句中很大的一个分支。所以这个题目用宾语从句结合”三改一去掉“的技巧就成为:

The line chart illustrates how much fish, lamb, beef and chicken was consumed in a European country during the 25 years from 1979.

这样一来就用上了与原句完全不一样的语法结构,跟”less skillful“是肯定沾不上边了。

不过基础差的同学在使用这种技巧的时候要特别注意不要犯这样的错误:

The line chart illustrates how much fish, lamb, beef and chicken consumption in a European country during the 25 years from 1979.

这句话的错误在于宾语从句里面没有动词,宾语从句也是句子,是句子就要有动词,所以在改宾语从句的过程中首先要问自己一下,从句中的动词在哪里。

再来几个例子巩固一下:

The pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000. (剑7 Test 4 P. 101)

改:

The pie graphs illustrate how much electricity was produced by different fuel sources in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000.

再来一题:

The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport. (剑8 Test 4 P. 101)

改:

The line chart illustrates how much goods was transported in the UK by four different means of transportation during the 28 years from 1974.

也有不用How much的,比如:

The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001. (剑8 Test 2 P.53)

改:

The three graphs illustrate how a particular UK school allocated its budget in 1981, 1991 and 2001.

这个题简单一点的改法也可以:

The three graphs illustrate how a particular UK school used its money in 1981, 1991 and 2001.

再比如:

The charts below show the main reasons for study among students of different age groups and the amount of support they received from employers. (剑5 Test 2 P. 52)

改:

The bar charts illustrate why students of different age chose to study and how muchsupport they could get from their employers

雅思作文的开头技巧三

一、观点简洁明了:

这一般适用于观点和讨论类文章。尤其是观点类文章是比较容易的一个写作类型。题目会把现象告诉你,你只要表明“是”或者“否”就可以了。所以,如果你碰到了观点类的题目,正常发挥下,写作分不会太低,因为你不太容易跑题;保持自己的立场不变,全文要围绕自己的观点阐述,那基本也不会偏题。但这类作文很难出彩,大家都用一样的套路,你如何脱颖而出呢?

“避开大多数”:很多人都会这么写,题目提供的社会背景+一方观点+另一方观点+自己的观点+总结;基本就是这个套路,别说你没有用过这个模式。考官看这个模式早已经看太多,你再怎么语法单词天衣无缝能拿高分吗?额,天衣无缝可以!

老师总结了雅思考官的作文范文开头,很简单,只做了两步:第一给文章观点做简单的总结,然后就表明自己的立场和观点。简洁明了,不明白?看范文!

雅思考官范文

A child’s education has never been about learning information and basic skills only. It has always included teaching the next generation how to be good members of society. Therefore, this cannot be the responsibility of the parents alone.

二、引用名人名言:

这是个捷径,就像你考语文作文的时候,都喜欢先放一段名人名言唬唬人,英语同样是,尤其你作为一个外国人,会使用名人名言,会加分不少。

三、话题拓展,引发讨论:

有时候雅思写作也会跟着时事热点走,针对热点话题的作文或者是有争议性事情的时候,可以适当的拓展话题,在作文开头提议提出有争议性的问题,激发考官的阅读兴趣,让他对你的文章感兴趣,这个难度可能比较高。

高分范文:

If police in the U.K. are able to go without guns and not have crime getting completely out of control then they have already set a fine example that other countries should follow. The fact that they are able to do this is an indication of their ability to control the flow of guns to the general populace and this makes citizens safer than anything else. To a civilian, taking guns away from criminals is more important than giving them to police.

雅思作文的开头技巧四

1. 采用媒体报道引出话题,把问题呈现在读者面前,引起读者思考

例如在写关于该不该禁烟的话题时,可以这样开头:A recent study conducted by Zhongshan University has found that the number of smokers has been increasing sharply over the past five years. Research findings also reveal that the incidence of smoking-related conditions has soared. As a result, the ban on smoking has been in the spotlight. (中山大学最近做的一个研究表明,在过去五年里,吸烟人数急剧上升。研究结果同时显示,吸烟导致的疾病发病率也急剧增长。因此,禁烟成为一个热点话题。这个开头通过媒体报道把问题呈现在读者面前,从而引出吸烟比例急剧上升造成的危害,引发读者思考。

2. 提出有争议性的问题,激发读者兴趣,使其积极参与讨论

例如在写到警察是否应该持枪这篇文章时作者说 If police in the U.K. are able to go without guns and not have crime getting completely out of control then they have already set a fine example that other countries should follow. The fact that they are able to do this is an indication of their ability to control the flow of guns to the general populace and this makes citizens safer than anything else. To a civilian, taking guns away from criminals is more important than giving them to police. 提出这个有争议的话题,激发读者的兴趣,使读者积极参与到讨论中来,让大家各抒己见进行讨论。

3. 引起读者兴趣的话题

例如在写关于体罚的话题文章时,采用这样一个开头:It is reported that a boy in Zhuhai was beaten to death by his father on Father' Day. Ample evidence also shows that children who are frequently abused by their parents or teachers tend to be introverted, pessimistic, indifferent and even world-weary. Recently, there has arisen a fierce argument on whether corporal punishment should be abolished. Teachers, parents and experts take diverse attitudes towards this issue.(据报道,在父亲节那天,珠海有个小男孩被爸爸打死了。充分的证据也显示,经常遭父母或老师虐待的小孩往往比较内向、悲观、冷漠甚至厌世。近来,关于是否应该废除体罚出现了一场激烈的争论,老师、家长和老师各执一词。)当读者看到这个话题时产生了浓厚的兴趣进而引起了对这件事情的思考。

4. 呈现该话题正反方的观点

例如在写到男性和女性谁可以做更好的父母时可以这样开头:At the mere mention of women governing the world, most of us may naturally form an unrealistic picture of a more peaceful world where the sun always shines. The other side of the picture, however, is just to the opposite.

在开头提出两种不同的观点,不同的读者可以根据自己对问题的看法进行思考,从而引发读者的探究心理,进一步思考这个问题从而得出结论。

5. 引用名人名言、谚语等作为文章的开头

例如在写到先天跟后天哪一个更重要时,“Genius is two percent inspiration and ninety-eight percent perspiration” is the opinion held by Edison. This remark has been confirmed time and again by more and more people. “天才是百分之二的灵感,百分之九十八的汗水”是爱迪生的观点,而且反复被越来越多的人所证实,通过引用名人名言揭示了文章的主题,为下文很好地做了铺垫。

6. 对将要讨论的话题进行定义

例如在写到Globalization时,Globalization-the international spread of products, ideas and information-is bringing the world closer together. But globalization is not a new concept. For thousands of years, nations have roamed the earth in search of new markets and new sources of raw materials for their own industries.

关于"全球化"这个名词,考生并不陌生,但是怎样用合理的语言来赋予它一个含义,这并非易事,上述的引言段就很好地做到了这一点,先是从字面上诠释了"全球化"的定义,进而又从实际生活角度赋予了它另外一层含义。

7. 追根溯源法

即从题目给出的话题中找出这个现象产生的原因来扩展背景句。这种方法适合大多数的话题。例如There are social, medical and technical problems associated with the use of mobile phones. What forms do they take? Do you a雅思e that the problems outweigh the benefits of mobile phone? 这个题目中给出的话题是mobile phone, 所以考生可以从它产生的原因来考虑,就是科技的繁荣,而科技的繁荣,手机的广泛使用是在20世纪末,这样背景句就有内容可写了。当然要通过相应的句型来写,这个背景句就可以写成:The late 20th century witnessed the boom of science and technology, which gave rise to a series of technological innovations, including the mobile phone.

再比如另外一道题目:Nowadays, some universities offer students skills that assist them to find employment, but some people believe that the main function of a university should be to provide students with access to knowledge for its sake. What is your opinion?

这题要求大家讨论大学是提供职业技能还是传授知识。从传统观点来看,大学是传授知识的地方,为什么会提出要传授技能呢?所以这里考生也可以用追根溯源法思考一下,大家肯定可以想到是由于找工作已经成为当今教育的目的之一了,所以很多大学就转移到以传授技能为主了。As job-hunting has become one of the main purposes of university education, the majority of the universities tend to offer vocational trainings to prepare the students for their future career.

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