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雅思作文如何开头

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雅思作文如何开头


雅思作文如何开头

在这一小时里,晓燕将带大家学习雅思写作的开头段。好的开头对一篇文章的重要性无须多言,可不少同学不但写不出精彩的开头,就连平平常常的开头也要绞尽脑汁才写得出,结果文章一开头便索然寡味,令人不愿往下读,得分也就可想而知了。高尔基曾说:“开头第一句是最困难的,好像音乐里的定调一样,往往要费很长时间才能找到它。”这句话恰如其分地说明了文章开头的重要性和难度。议论文的开篇精彩与否,会直接影响到能否吸引读者,并接受你的说理。对于雅思的文章而言,开篇的直指成败的重要性是不言而喻的。开篇的风格可以是多样化的,它可以是新闻背景式、直抒胸臆式和悬念存疑式。对考生而言,我们在写议论文的开头,就要像书法绘画讲究落笔,吹拉弹唱讲究定调一样,需要反复斟酌,仔细推敲,力求恰到好处,先声夺人,在才情的展露中赢得阅卷者的好感。

此外,作为雅思应考作文,使阅卷者能一目了然地把握全文主旨是非常关键的。

因此,在行文安排上比较好能在开篇中反映出成文的立意,不可模糊、晦涩。

晓燕在这里介绍最适合雅思考试的几种开头段的方法。

方法一情景渐入法 推荐指数★★★★

情景渐人法:这是议论文开头常用写法:就是讲述一种社会、自然现象,或描述一个场景,以此揭开序幕铺垫气氛;然后对此作一番阐述,尽量避免晦涩、拖沓。不要让阅卷者评卷时费解,甚至产生误解。这种方法便于学习,易于掌握,是雅思考试中最常用的一种方法在背景的介绍引入的方法上,我们可以将其分为两种结构。

1.背景深入分析法。结构如下:

第1句 描述问题现状 The present situation

第2句 细化观点 The further explanation of the present situation

第3句 主题:文章目的 Thesis: What you are going to do in your essay.

结构分析范例:

1 .Who should take care of our old people?

Every heart has its own sorrow.各人有各人的苦恼。

Sentence 1 In my country, most old people live happily with their children.

Sentence 2 Increasingly however, many families cannot take care of their parents.

Sentence 3 (Thesis) This essay will describe some of the problems involved with taking care of old people, and discuss who should be responsible.

2. Does aid to poor countries work?

Sentence 1

For the last fifty years,poor countries have been receiving huge sums of money from rich donor countries.

Sentence 2

Some of this money has improved lives, while much of it has disappeared or made no difference.

Sentence 3(Thesis)

In this essay,will discuss some arguments for and against foreign aid.

3. Should dangerous sports be banned?

Sentence 1 Every year, thousands of people are injured or killed in sports such as boxing or motor-racing.

Sentence 2 Because of this, many people are opposed to such sports, and want them to be stopped or controlled.

Sentence 3 (Thesis) This essay will look at some of the arguments for and against banning

dangerous sports.

2.双方观点较量法,结构如下:

第1句 一方观点 One side of the present situation

第2句 另一方观点 The other side of the present situation

第3句 主题:文章目的 Thesis: What you are going to do in your essay.

结构分析范例:

1 .Does space exploration benefit mankind?

Sentence For Many people are excited about space exploration.

Sentence Against However, others feel it is a massive waste of money.

Sentence 3 (Thesis) This essay will look at some of the arguments for and against space

exploration.

2. Does space exploration benefit mankind?

Sentence For

Space, for many people, really is the final frontier. They excited by the exploration and potential%of space.

Sentence Against

However, not everyone agrees that this money is well-spent. Many people feel that we should solve problems here on earth before beginning our journey to space.

Sentence 3 (Thesis)

This essay will look at some exploration.of the arguments for and against space

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