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雅思作文开头段怎么写

无论是大多数考生备考雅思的过程中,还是从历年来雅思考试四项的中国考生平均分,都可以反映出中国考生在雅思写作方面的薄弱。因为写作是最能体现个人的语言运用能力和水平的,下面小编告诉你雅思作文开头段怎么写,大家一起来看看吧!

雅思作文开头段怎么写:

在具体写作的过程中,考生要遇到的第一步事情应该是引言段的写作。俗话说,万事开头难。很多考生不知道如何开头,浪费时间,导致无法在规定时间内完成250个单词的大作文。其实,引言段可先通过对background 的描写来引出话题。

II Background 方法介绍

总结归纳Background的写作,认为应该从内容同句型上同时做到补充。下面先介绍下扩充背景句的方法:

1). 追根溯源法。即从题目给出的话题中找出这个现象产生的原因来扩展背景句。这种方法适合大多数的话题,考生要尽量在考前做练习,这样在考试就可以得心应手了。

请看下面的例子:

There are social, medical and technical problems associated with the use of mobile phones. What forms do they take? Do you agree that the problems outweigh the benefits of mobile phones?

这个题目中给出的话题是mobile phone,所以考生可以从它产生的原因来考虑,就是科技的繁荣,而科技的繁荣,手机的广泛使用是在20世纪末,这样背景句就有内容可写了。当然要通过相应的句型来写了。如

… (time) witnessed …

这个背景句就可以写成: The late 20th century witnessed the boom of science and technology, which gave rise to a series of technological innovations, including the mobile phone.

再看一例:

Nowadays, some universities offer students skills that assist them to find employment, but some people believe that the main function of a university should be to provide students with access to knowledge for its sake. What is your opinion?

这题要求大家讨论大学是提供职业技能还是传授知识。那从传统观点来看,大学是传授知识的地方,为什么会提出要传授技能呢,所以这里考生也可以用追根溯源法思考下,大家肯定可以想到是由于找工作已经成为当今教育的目的之一了,所以很多大学就转移到以传授技能为主了。那当然还是要结合句型,这里可以用as 引导的原因状语从句。

参考:As job-hunting has become one of the main purposes of university education, the majority of the universities tend to offer vocational trainings to prepare the students for their future career.

2). 重述法。即对关于这个话题的当前现状的重述。

请看一例:

Nowadays, people are facing more and more work-related stress. State the possible reasons for this phenomenon and make some recommendations about how to combat it。

本题的话题关于压力,那考生可从当前社会现象来考虑这个问题,考生不难想出当下对压力这一现象的情况,即很多人都在承受着或多或少的压力。可用it is generally believed that … 形式主语的句型。

雅思大作文开头段怎么写:

考生在写雅思大作文开头时应注意以下三大要素:

要素之一: Restatement of the Topic

(雅思写作大作文的题目都会给出相关情景或话题,在首段中应先对题目中的情景或话题进行展开。)

方法一:改写。即按照雅思写作题目所给的内容,用不同的表达方法重新写一遍,千万不能抄袭。但改一两个词不算改写,一定要将整个表达方式改掉。

方法二:自己展开。即根据雅思写作题目所谈到的话题内容适当展开,简单谈谈目前社会中的情况怎样。但不要谈得太多,更不能偏题。这需要大量的雅思写作辅导,大家在私底下要勤加练习。

要素之二:Express Your Opinion (雅思写作大作文的题目中一般会问你 do you agree or disagree 或 what do you think等,因此必须与之相对应地在首段中表明你的观点。)

方法一:中立观点。可以说某种做法既有好又有坏;对某种观点有人同意又有人不同意等等。较好的表达如I partly agree with the opinion expressed above.

方法二:一边倒观点。即直截了当地说赞成某个观点或不赞成某个观点。

方法三:不表达观点。即不在首段明确地表达自己的观点,但必须要先分析一下,在最后一段表明观点。

方法一在雅思写作考试中用得最多;方法二适中;方法三用得比较少。

要素之三:No Excessive Background

(雅思写作大作文首段中只要涵盖以上两要素即可,不要写过多不相干的展开内容,更不要将理由写进去,否则主体段就没内容写了。)

雅思作文的开头怎么写:

作文的首段通常包含以下几个方面:

1)场景或背景信息,即题目中出现的phenomenon.

2)一些人的观点(some people's opinion),这部分在改写文章首段时可要可不要,考生可按照自己的情况来安排.

3)个人观点,这一部分在有些文章的开首段中也可以不要.

大作文要求字数至少达到250字,在写作中考虑到字数的合理安排,第一段比较好写3-5句话,大约40字左右,并且切忌在第一段就掏心掏肺把什么话都说完.因此大作文开首方式通常有以下几种情况:

1)题目中包含了背景信息(phenomenon),有时也出现一些人的观点,并且题目中字数较多.这种情况下比较保险的办法是将题目中的背景信息及一些人的观点重新表达(paraphrase),可以做:

主动语态被动语态、主谓宾主系表、某些近义词互换

Example:

At present,it is hard for college students to find jobs.Many people claim that college teachers should give priority to practical courses like computer science and business over such traditional ones as history and geography.To what extent do you agree?

→ The number of college graduates is surging while a substantial proportion of them have difficulties in finding employment after their graduation.Numerous people blame this on the university education and believe that more emphasis should be laid on practical courses such as computer science and business than on traditional courses like history and geography.其后再加考生自己的观点即可.

2)题目中包含了背景信息,有时出现一些人的观点,但题目中字数较少,若直接重新表达,字数凑不到40字左右.这种情况下推荐以下2种开首方式来保证字数:

把笼统信息细节化即通过举例来解释说明题目中的背景信息.

Example:

International tourism has become a big industry in the world.Do the benefits outweigh the problems?

→The acceleration of globalization and high-tech development contributes to International tourism's gaining momentum virtually all over the world.Each year,millions of tourists from other countries swarm into china to appreciate the scenery and Chinese traditional culture.其后加入考生个人观点即可.

追溯历史,过去与现在形成对比.

Example:

International tourism has become a big industry in the world.Do the benefits outweigh the problems?

→Prior to the early 1900s,the proportion of people traveling abroad was considerably low and the majority of them preferred domestic travel.However,the advent of the motorized flight has greatly changed our life and it makes international traveling more convenient.International tourism is gaining momentum and has become a big industry.其后加入考生个人观点即可.

3)题目中仅出现一部分人的观点,而没有背景信息.这种情况下,我们可以根据这部分人的观点所涉及的信息在开首段附加对背景信息的描述.

Example:

The best way to solve the world's environmental problem is to increase the price of fuel.Do you agree or disagree?

→In the process of industrialization and urbanization,the scope of environmental problem facing the world is getting immense.From Mexico City and New York to Singapore and China new solutions to this problem are being proposed,tried and implemented.Some people believe increasing the price of fuel is the best approach to this problem.其后加入考生个人观点即可.

另外,要提醒考生注意的是开首段一定要避免出现语法错误,因为如果语法错误影响文章的理解,那会给考官留下极差的第一印象,而考官也就没有信心继续往下读了,最终大作文的得分也不会很高.

雅思写作开头段写法:

很多同学写开头都陷入了一种典型的模板化趋势,我们先来看一道2012年的真题:

Some people think that government should establish free libraries in each town.

While others believe that it is a waste of money since people can obtain information from the internet at home. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

拿到这个题目,不少烤鸭笔下的开头是这样的:

Nowadays, the human society is progressing rapidly on various fronts. Yet at the same time, whether government should establish free libraries in each town has sparked much debate. Some people think government should establish free libraries in each town , while others believe that it is a waste of money since people can obtain information from the internet at home. Personally, I am in favor of the former view.

不知道有没有同学“躺枪”,写这种开头的同学,分数绝对不可能高于5.5,整个开头几乎可以说是在“自杀”,除了套模板,就是照搬原题,考官拿到这种开头是绝对不会有好印象的。 那真正好的开头是什么样子的呢?好的开头又好在哪儿呢?我们一起来研究一篇剑8的TEST1中剑桥考官的给出的范文,先来看一下题目:

Some parents think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

考官范文的开头是这样的:

A child’s education has never been about learning information and basic skills only. It has always included teaching the next generation how to be good members of society. Therefore, this cannot be the responsibility of the parents alone.

从这篇考官范文的开头,我们不难看出,它并没有模式化的“社会背景引入---提出正方观点---再提出反方观点---最后陈述自己观点”,而是只作了两件事

一:给核心名词下定义。

在本文中,即是给child’s education下了个定义,谈了一下在作者看来,child’s education是什么样的。

二:表明观点或立场。

在本文中,即阐明孩子的教育问题不仅仅只关乎家长。 所以,好的开头可以“无模板,但有逻辑。” 翻翻剑桥雅思考官的范文,我们会发现很多考官在开头段都只干了两件事:下定义+ 表明观点,或者是引出背景+表明观点,甚至很多考官只干了一件事,即引出背景,仅此而已。

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